Example 2

Extract 2: Integrative summary

Whilst Budget Based Funding and National Partnership Agreement funding had been instrumental in the ease of access to childcare and education for disadvantaged communities, these programs expired mid 2014, on June 30 (Brennan & Adamson, 2014). To combat this, families were advised to begin receiving assistance from the primary financial aid programs in Australia, such as the Child Care Benefit and Child care rebate. The study conducted by Biddle (2016) noted that within the Closing the Gap report for 2016, among other issues, childhood education and school attendance are not on target. Brennan and Adamson agree with this, suggesting that this could be attributed to lack of funding provided to disadvantaged families, as the primary sources of financial aid are not tailored to these families and often, not easily accessible. It should also be noted that children from these disadvantaged groups are less participative in school activities and more likely to be doing anti social activities such as watching television long term, whereas other children can be seen taking part in extra curricular activities and socialising (Brennan & Adamson, 2014). Biddle builds on this idea by stating that the lack of activities that include children from all social backgrounds also contributes to the experiences of discrimination faced by disadvantaged children, further demonstrating the detrimental effects that lack of equal accessibility to care brings.

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Example 1

Extract 1: Literature review

The main concerns for female MDWs are human trafficking, abuse from employers and poor working conditions (Islam and Cojocaru 2015). These problems are addressed through each article, however, are shown with different objectives in mind. Goh et al. (2017) have chosen to focus on a specific state – Singapore and further research the industry of private recruitment agencies for MDWs, wanting to understand if their work is useful in combating the common difficulties faced by MDWs. They achieved this by conducting interviews with recruitment agents, industry association members, non-governmental organisations (NGO) and Ministry of Manpower (MOM) in Singapore. “…agents are held responsible for ensuring the workers’ legal entry into Singapore, and are threatened with warnings or the revocations of their licenses should they fail” (Goh et al. 2017, 417). Their research highlighted the need for these agencies to be used in all states concerned with MDWs as the process of being hired from a different state can be difficult to navigate and adds a layer of responsibility to a third party, ensuring the MDW is employed legally and safely (Goh et al. 2017, 416). In Islam and Cojocaru’s (2015) article the objectives are also clear; expose the transnational variations of MDWs, including the work, legal identity, hours worked and compensation (48) by providing details on a variety of states affected, as well as address policy concerns like data on MDWs, working conditions and exploitations (49). The authors from both texts agree recruitment agencies are necessary for change; “present flow of the MDWs will be an important business, where the private recruitment agencies will play a vital role” (Islam and Cojocaru 2015, 60) They also both note that the highest priority is that MDWs must have a single international regulatory body that creates law and enforces them, and that this has to be created by a respected, international body that will be able to enforce the law and regulate it (Goh et al. 2017, 419).

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